干货：AEIS写作中的常见语言错误（二）

　　AEIS写作考试难点有很多，思路和语法是其中最常见的两项。前者的攻克似乎需要日积月累的坚持，而后者的达成却有一些快速有效的方法。在上篇文章中，我们已经提到AEIS写作中4种语法错误，在这篇文章中我们将继续分析其他五类语法错误点。　　

　　常见错误五：冠词误用

　　-错误范例：

　　1.The disagreement promotes further exploration.

　　2.Disagreement of these two economists’ opinions on the prediction encouraged them to delve into more thorough research.

　　-错误原因分析：

　　1、“分歧促进深入探索”，此时的disagreement应该为泛指，不需要the；2、“这两位经济学家关于预测结果的意见的分歧激励他们进行更全面的研究”，这里的”disagreement”应该是特指这两个人的意见的分歧，所以需要”the”。

　　-改正后：

　　1.Disagreementpromotes further exploration.

　　2.The disagreementof these two economists’ opinions on the prediction encouraged them to delve into more thorough research.

　　常见错误六：从句误用

　　-错误范例：

　　1.This is apparently themost reasonablesolution which can change the situation.

　　2.The author claims this new air traffic control system will work well and it allows more planes to be in the air more safely and able to fly more direct routes.

　　3.No matter who has the courage to challenge the authority is likely to succeed.

　　-错误原因分析：

　　1、定语从句修饰的先行词solution被形容成最高级the most resonable修饰，所以定语从句应该用that引导而非which；2、正规书面语中，宾语从句的that一般不省略，此句中claim后面引导两个宾语从句，考生经常忽略第二个宾语从句的引导词that；2、no matter who只能引导让步状语从句，而whoever既可以引导让步状语从句也可以引导名词性从句。

　　-改正后：

　　1.This is apparently themost reasonablesolution thatcan change the situation.

　　2.The author claims thatthis new air traffic control system will work well and thatit allows more planes to be in the air more safely and able to fly more direct routes.

　　3.Whoeverhas the courage to challenge the authority is likely to succeed.

　　常见错误七：混淆语态

　　-错误范例：

　　Comparing to the first opinion, the second one makes more sense.

　　-错误原因分析：

　　非谓语动词”compare”的逻辑主语应该和主句主语”the second one”一致，而”opinion”不能主动去比较。

　　-改正后：

　　Comparedto the first opinion, the second one makes more sense.

　　常见错误八：代词误用

　　-错误范例：

　　1.My son is the only one whom I would be very concerned about if my husband and me were to separate.

　　2.If you complain that Bangkok has lost its exotic flavor, China town will be the answer.

　　3.The witness wanted to offer anonymous testimony. They were afraid of getting hurt if their names were spread.

　　-错误原因分析：

　　1、用作主语，要用人称代词的主格而不是宾格；2、学术性文章尽量避免第一人称和第二人称。第一人称易使文章显得片面而主观，第二人称会让文章看上去很有指控性，即把责任都推到了读者身上；3、用第三人称进行写作时，往往在需要单数的时候写成了复数形式。

　　-改正后：

　　1.My son is the only one whom I would be very concerned about if my husband and Iwere to separate.

　　2.For thosewho complain that Bangkok has lost its exotic flavor, China town is the answer.

　　3.The witness wanted to offer anonymous testimony. He or shewas afraid of getting hurt if his or hername was spread.

　　常见错误九：大词误用

　　-错误范例：

　　Obviously, he gets a sanguine opinion so he can ignore lots of difficulties.

　　-错误原因分析：

　　“很显然，他天性乐观，所以能够克服许多困难”。句中”sanguine”这个词是非常正式的书面语，用在这里和作者的get, ignore等不精准的表达方式明显格格不入。

　　-改正后：

　　1.Obviously, he has been quite optimistic, so he could overcome so many difficulties. （舍弃sanguine，整句话较为平实但不失准确）

　　14.Obviously, it is hissanguine attitude that enables himto surmount all the difficulties. （保留sanguine，句式和表达的改变让句子更加凝练且重点突出）

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