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去新加坡留学,不能只了解2017南京AEIS集训,还要用心关注2017年新加坡AEIS考试时间以及新加坡AEIS考试大纲,今天AEIS考试培训网老师就来谈谈最近比较热门的新话题:近水之地。这篇AEIS写作范文的主要内容是描述一些你想去的在水边的地方,并加入了一下范文的思路讲解。
题目很简单:Describe a place near water you want to visit.
上海AEIS带你来一起欣赏下这篇范文:
The place I’m all dreaming about is the place in Mediterranean area. It can be any country, region, or any city located there, such as Greece and Morocco. The deep blue sea and unique style of housing decoration are pictures that always come into my mind. Besides that, the mouthwatering foods there are another part which makes me crazy about.
这段内容是整个回答的一个介绍,为后面的扩展作一个引子。
The Mediterranean has always been listed as one of the Top 10 World’s tourist attractions, especially for those newly-wed couples flying all the way from other countries and starting the hot honeymoon vacation. In China, you know, it’s not that easy to find a sea like that, and it’s boring to see modern buildings with similar shape all the time. But the Mediterranean style houses—blue and white appearance is pretty much like refreshment to the pale world, or like adding spice to meals. I guess the feeling will be fantastic!

这部分的内容是继开头部分中提到的“deep blue sea and unique style of housing decoration”进行扩展描述,具体解释。
The live seafood has been another reason that pushes me coming to visit. A large range of seafood can be found in local market and seaside restaurant, such as oysters, salmon, lobsters, sea cucumbers, and so forth. Another thing, which is particularly popular on Mediterranean table, is the high quality olive oil, liquid gold as the nickname. I’m so curious about how the locals drink olive oil simply because they enjoy it too much! People there seem to lead a very peaceful life, by that I mean, they don’t worry about the pollution, for no one have the heart to destroy such art-like environment.
这段则是对开头部分提到的“mouth-watering seafood”进行扩展描述,通过罗列的方式举出哪些seafood。
There are so many attractions for me to go and see it someday in person; otherwise it’s still a dream. And of course, I’ll bring my father a bottle of fine wine, since it’s also the place where the best white wine comes from.
最后通过另外一个小点“white wine”进行简单结尾。
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